Saturday, May 21, 2005

Beyond the window frame

Crystal clear water at the feet
Endless blue sky above the head
Starring into the distance
She senses the flame of desire
Between the deep blue sea and the pastel blue sky

Air of happiness
Smell of the fishes
A flip of her wings
Flying high...Flying far...Flying wild...
Between the deep blue sea and the pastel blue sky

Passion burns in her heart
The glare of delight reflects from the water beneath
Bridging the earth and the heaven
Between the deep blue sea and the pastel blue sky
An arch of rainbow

6 Comments:

Blogger 3 potties said...

i totally loved this one...

refreshing...

can i link you from my blog?

iyer

Monday, May 23, 2005 8:03:00 pm  
Blogger 3 potties said...

couldn't wait for your reply, so i have gone ahead and added a link to your blog.

Reason: i see something refresh and i see immense potential to kick lolly's butt in poetry writing!

let me know if you have any violent objects.

iyer

Tuesday, May 24, 2005 6:56:00 pm  
Blogger 3 potties said...

nice verse
temperamental though

Lolly

Tuesday, May 24, 2005 9:01:00 pm  
Blogger Seagal said...

you really made me laugh out loud reading your comment Iyer;)
Still miles to go before i could be close enough to kick Lolly's ass lol

Wednesday, May 25, 2005 10:09:00 pm  
Blogger Seagal said...

Thanks for the very encouraging and sweet words Iyer. I appreciate that you loved this one a lot, but I don't understand why, how and what kind of feeling you had when you read this post. Would you like to share?
Cheers....

Wednesday, May 25, 2005 10:16:00 pm  
Blogger 3 potties said...

would love to share! over coffee mebbe? you from singapore or do i need to catch a flight someplace? ;)

iyer

Wednesday, May 25, 2005 11:35:00 pm  

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