Beyond the window frame
Crystal clear water at the feet
Endless blue sky above the head
Starring into the distance
She senses the flame of desire
Between the deep blue sea and the pastel blue sky
Air of happiness
Smell of the fishes
A flip of her wings
Flying high...Flying far...Flying wild...
Between the deep blue sea and the pastel blue sky
Passion burns in her heart
The glare of delight reflects from the water beneath
Bridging the earth and the heaven
Between the deep blue sea and the pastel blue sky
An arch of rainbow
Endless blue sky above the head
Starring into the distance
She senses the flame of desire
Between the deep blue sea and the pastel blue sky
Air of happiness
Smell of the fishes
A flip of her wings
Flying high...Flying far...Flying wild...
Between the deep blue sea and the pastel blue sky
Passion burns in her heart
The glare of delight reflects from the water beneath
Bridging the earth and the heaven
Between the deep blue sea and the pastel blue sky
An arch of rainbow
6 Comments:
i totally loved this one...
refreshing...
can i link you from my blog?
iyer
couldn't wait for your reply, so i have gone ahead and added a link to your blog.
Reason: i see something refresh and i see immense potential to kick lolly's butt in poetry writing!
let me know if you have any violent objects.
iyer
nice verse
temperamental though
Lolly
you really made me laugh out loud reading your comment Iyer;)
Still miles to go before i could be close enough to kick Lolly's ass lol
Thanks for the very encouraging and sweet words Iyer. I appreciate that you loved this one a lot, but I don't understand why, how and what kind of feeling you had when you read this post. Would you like to share?
Cheers....
would love to share! over coffee mebbe? you from singapore or do i need to catch a flight someplace? ;)
iyer
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